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Posted by Maddie on August 17, 2011 at 12:25 AM

Two members of the Facebook fanpage "Poetry..." asked me to post their poetry here. Let me know what you think of these poems below!


1. Edt my world by Alexander Okieff (cheeseandpoetry.webs.com/apps/photos/photo?photoid=13472568 ;)

2. Untitled by Nick Ade' (reproduced below)


Secretly she loves me

sadly I don’t see.

To focused on the grass that’s green

Not hearing or seeing her when she calls me.

Secretly she cares but I’m a fool in love

With the girl of my dreams

but she really doesn’t deserve me

sadly i'm not realizing God put the girl

of my dreams in front of me.

I dream of fantasies even

When long ago God made my dreams a reality.

Secretly she thinks of me

but I’m too focused on another

girl that doesn't see.

 

Secretly she loves me

sadly I don’t see

because I’m too focused

on the grass that’s green.

Secretly she writes what she thinks of me

but she deletes her message

because I say there’s only one girl for me

And no one else can replace what she brings.

Secretly she screams please hold me

but I don’t understand what she needs.

Secretly she wants to be more than friends

and when she heard the girl of my dreams

said I was too nice and could only be friends

That's when she secretly said

I was all that she needs.

Sadly I don’t see.

 

Secretly she loves me

sadly I don’t see

because I’m too focused

on the grass that’s green.

Secretly she pleads for the day I hold her

but I’m on a living roller coaster

to afraid of the day the girl of

my dreams turns me away.

Secretly she cries from all the nights alone

But I’m like a dog without his bone

to focused on and zoned out from what is gone.

Secretly she is dying from my absence

But I am like an upperclassmen.

Skipping class when I should be taking notes

but I’m too close to the end to be

spending my time with freshmen.

 

Secretly she smiles when I dazzle

the girl of my dreams with poetry

but when she asks how you feel about me?

I reply what do you mean

you know there’s only one girl for me.

Secretly she loves me

sadly I don’t see

because I’m too focused

on the grass that’s green.

 

Once I gained the girl of my dreams

I realized the grass wasn’t so green

but when I looked back to see the girl of my reality

I found that she moved on to be another man’s dream…


Categories: Other, Poetry

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